Feedback on my first review

DutchJamesBondFan

Today I started recording my first Bond review. But there are some things I'm not sure that are very clear, at first it's my speak. Am I understandable for someone who hasn't read the script, or is my Dutch accent too much? Then there's the story what happened before Dr. No, not really sure if I told it in a clear way. Hopefully you guys could give me some feedback and I can upload it soon. Thanks in advance. -{

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h5mRrdTUYEo

Dirty Punker

Unlike most other reviews I've seen, this has a nice, fast paced energy to it, courtesy of the editing (something that, I hope that doesn't sound stupid, I've only seen in my reviews). The first minute or so with the interviews etc. are what made it feel a bit off, thinking I would be seeing a complication of such as a review. Had you introduced yourself so that we knew who it is was (or would be) that is speaking or made the carry-over clearer, it would've been much nicer. Or, you could go the opposite route and write your own script based on those, improve on it and present it as your own.

As far as your accent goes, I wouldn't worry about it too much. Unlike my own videos it was entirely consistent throughout a whole minute or so )

I'd imagine this would be quite a long video but I would be quite interested to see it.

Keep it up.

DutchJamesBondFan

Thank you! The interviews were just as an introduction to the video, but I understand how it can be a bit off. I take it with me in the renewed version.

Thunderpussy

I thought it was very good indeed concise and entertaining.
Best wishes for your furure reviews. {[]