@magumogu I enjoyed reading this very much. I think the loose ties to other Bond films & novels is a good step. By careful not to be obvious. The psychokinetic angle is more interesting than the usual technobabble bolllox we have had to recent endure [SF SP NTTD]. I'd be wary of spoon feeding Bond information. I think in a noir leaning movie he should 1) discover plot and character through his own investigation 2) be constantly befuddled until the final reel, as it were. So hide elements of the Brotherhood scheme, for instance. I like the introduction of Fleming's short story.
While it isn't going to influence Eon, it's the kind of storyline which I wish they might consider. Keep the Act's coming.
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@magumogu I enjoyed reading this very much. I think the loose ties to other Bond films & novels is a good step. By careful not to be obvious. The psychokinetic angle is more interesting than the usual technobabble bolllox we have had to recent endure [SF SP NTTD]. I'd be wary of spoon feeding Bond information. I think in a noir leaning movie he should 1) discover plot and character through his own investigation 2) be constantly befuddled until the final reel, as it were. So hide elements of the Brotherhood scheme, for instance. I like the introduction of Fleming's short story.
While it isn't going to influence Eon, it's the kind of storyline which I wish they might consider. Keep the Act's coming.
And welcome to AJB 😀😀
I will look forward to reading your full extended synopsis 😀