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ZCtheAuthor
Posts: 21MI6 Agent
Ok now onto the story! I recently learned about this charity thing going around called Invisable Children or something, it's about a terrorist group known as the LRA in Africa who take young children to fight for them and so on. So I set this up as a plot and decided to toss Quantum into the mix. Now I'm not sure about the rest fo you but with all that is said in Casino Royale it sort of sets it after all the others movies, end of cold war and 9/11 and so on. So I place my story beyond the others as well, again your opinion, and used Daniel Craig as my Bond.
My friend read my whole draft and outline and heard my ideas and saw my concept art for certain scenes and locations. He told me he couldn't wait but I'd also like others opinions. I'm very willing to place my outline here if you want to view it just tell me if you want it to be a secret I can do that too.
My friend read my whole draft and outline and heard my ideas and saw my concept art for certain scenes and locations. He told me he couldn't wait but I'd also like others opinions. I'm very willing to place my outline here if you want to view it just tell me if you want it to be a secret I can do that too.
Comments
I've read the first chapter of your novel, and I believe you have a good start for an exciting tale.
IMO, you already have two things that a writer must have: a strong imagination, and an eye for details. It's also very impressive that you even did some concept art for certain scenes (I must admit that I have very limited skills when it comes to that department).
I do have some other feedback regarding your writing that I'll send you via a PM.
Overall, what you've posted is a very promising start, so keep up the good work!
I've written around half a dozen short stories about Bond, and they have all been published or posted here at AJB. In addition, I've taken part in a couple of collaborative Bond novels as well.
I did try to write a novel about my own characters, but never quite finished it because I was too busy with my day job, or too busy writing about a guy named Bond