Many native speakers can't follow Shakespeare, so don't worry about it. We're writing a sort of Shakespearean-lite version of Olde English, the intention being to give the impression that the scripts are coming from that time period without being totally accurate.
The biggest challenge is modifying the technology rather than the language, and it's here that we have to be inventive. No submarines, spaceships, etc, so we have lots of ships!
Next scene, Sir James arrives at a shoppe selling ? voodoo stuff... ? strange things....? (with a comment about how Felix told him to go here) and sneaks out the back to see..... (leads to him hailing a cab and going to the bar).
I was thinking about Tee Hee and his arm, could it be from a suit of armour, or made of wood ?
With his sense of humour, I was mentally picturing Tommy Cooper.
Fillet of soul ..... Slice of spirit ..... Piece of Pisces ?
"I've been informed that there ARE a couple of QAnon supporters who are fairly regular posters in AJB."
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Don't you get the papers over there
I was thinking instead of poisoned wine, it could be a nut allergy ?
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The biggest challenge is modifying the technology rather than the language, and it's here that we have to be inventive. No submarines, spaceships, etc, so we have lots of ships!
Not that Barbel leaves out the occasion to pull my leg with it 8-)
Dalton - the weak and weepy Bond!
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(Do we want the taxi ride, with dialogue between Sir James and the driver, or should we skip to the bar?)
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Ride when or if we can come up with a few jokes.
I added a joke to the Bond's flat scene about "Bel Canto" as I think it sounds like " Belgrano "
I know it makes no sense
Sense??? Does ANY of this make sense???
I'm wondering if we should add a couple of lines above, where Tee Hee bends Sir James's sword?
With his sense of humour, I was mentally picturing Tommy Cooper.
Fillet of soul ..... Slice of spirit ..... Piece of Pisces ?
Sprit for the Spirit
Mead for the Mind